The person I chose to write my profile on is Danielle Boushey. She is a friend and coworker of mine. I chose Danielle because she is one of those super charming people you just can't help but like right away. I really enjoy her company; she has so much energy and she is so honest and real it's refreshing. She is also very interfering because she has two part time jobs, is a full time student, and still manages to have a ton of friends and a boyfriend in the military who she can find time to spend time with whenever he is home.
During my interview I really hope to learn more about Danielle. She is so interesting and open and honest that I feel it will be really fun to interview her! I also can't wait to practice my active listening skills (I'm an interrupter; at my house if you want anything to be heard you better shout it louder over the person who's talking at the same time!) and my note-taking skills. The last interview I did I looked back on my notes and realized they made no sense at all to me; I ended up having to email the person and follow up on things that were unclear in my notes. It was quite embarrassing and I'm determined to not have it happen again.
My plan to capture interesting quotes is to record the conversation if its okay with Danielle and put stars by points in the interview where good quotes may be located. I also want to ask questions that require thinking; if they're thinking the quotes should be easier to come by :) I'm really excited to do this profile piece, I adore talking to people and writing about them, so this is right up my alley!!
Friday, May 31, 2013
Wednesday, May 22, 2013
Blog #7 - Enterprise/Investigative Reporting
After reading the article "The Cost of Dying", I was really honestly sad. Some poor guy I didn't even know had died, and him just dying had not only put an emotional stress on his family, but also a financial burden! However, the actual act of investigative reporting seems daunting to me. Don't get me wrong, the author of that article did it super well, but I personally am a little intimidated by the idea of snooping around and trying to dig up truths from people who may or may not be incredibly terrifying!
Someone has to do it, and I think the whole idea of it is romantic and fantastic. I picture myself walking around in a little press hat with a camera and notebook interviewing people and getting pushed away by famous politicians and the likes, and publishing stories that are shocking and reveal some insane truth that has been covered up or lied about or just hidden from the public. When I think about investigative reporting that way, I think it sounds amazing. But I think the vision I have of reporting in that sense is mostly derived from films I've seen and also from Could Atlas, one of my favorite books, in which an investigative reporter tries to publish something about the instability of a huge nuclear reactor and almost gets killed and gets into gun fights and has this grand adventure. In the end, her story is published and she is this huge hero and what not.
But from what I've read and understood from the class, and from an analysis of "The Cost of Dying", I think investigative and enterprise reporting may actually be somewhat dull (at least in comparison to my over-active imagination). I also think it would be incredibly stressful. I can just say, if it was my father dying, I certainly wouldn't be trying to find out more about costs and writing a whole story on it. I would probably just be crying, and sobbing, and mopping around. Not writing. And certainly not publishing my tragedy for the world to see. Furthermore, if I was investigating a person, and they came after me angrily, I might just get angry right back at them and end up not only without a story but also with a nasty lawsuit on my hands. Also, the daunting idea of deadlines springs up into my head when I think of enterprise reporting, and I know how stressed out I can get if I don't have all my information at least planned, if not gathered, but the time a deadline is even announced. I couldn't imagine if I didn't even have a story idea, or if all I had was a shell, and my editor told me the deadline was in a few days.
So overall, investigative and enterprise reporting sounds like an amazing thing, and I think it would be something I would have a great interest in trying out, and something I might even enjoy. However, I don't know if I am cut out for the job. It sounds really difficult, and I give the people who can do it an immense amount of credit and respect. I just don't know if it's something I could handle.
Someone has to do it, and I think the whole idea of it is romantic and fantastic. I picture myself walking around in a little press hat with a camera and notebook interviewing people and getting pushed away by famous politicians and the likes, and publishing stories that are shocking and reveal some insane truth that has been covered up or lied about or just hidden from the public. When I think about investigative reporting that way, I think it sounds amazing. But I think the vision I have of reporting in that sense is mostly derived from films I've seen and also from Could Atlas, one of my favorite books, in which an investigative reporter tries to publish something about the instability of a huge nuclear reactor and almost gets killed and gets into gun fights and has this grand adventure. In the end, her story is published and she is this huge hero and what not.
But from what I've read and understood from the class, and from an analysis of "The Cost of Dying", I think investigative and enterprise reporting may actually be somewhat dull (at least in comparison to my over-active imagination). I also think it would be incredibly stressful. I can just say, if it was my father dying, I certainly wouldn't be trying to find out more about costs and writing a whole story on it. I would probably just be crying, and sobbing, and mopping around. Not writing. And certainly not publishing my tragedy for the world to see. Furthermore, if I was investigating a person, and they came after me angrily, I might just get angry right back at them and end up not only without a story but also with a nasty lawsuit on my hands. Also, the daunting idea of deadlines springs up into my head when I think of enterprise reporting, and I know how stressed out I can get if I don't have all my information at least planned, if not gathered, but the time a deadline is even announced. I couldn't imagine if I didn't even have a story idea, or if all I had was a shell, and my editor told me the deadline was in a few days.
So overall, investigative and enterprise reporting sounds like an amazing thing, and I think it would be something I would have a great interest in trying out, and something I might even enjoy. However, I don't know if I am cut out for the job. It sounds really difficult, and I give the people who can do it an immense amount of credit and respect. I just don't know if it's something I could handle.
Wednesday, May 15, 2013
Blog #6
Of the resources listed, the one I found most useful was The Adventurous Writer. This particular blog was incredibly helpful to me because I found the tips to be incredibly straight-forward, as well as tips I haven't heard before. For example, some of the other blogs had tips on them that I've definitely heard before, and that I feel are very elementry when it comes to writing. Personally, I found JProf to be uninteresting and straightforward; very little new information was presented on it. The LifeHack blog I found to be more interesting, but once again, the editting tips were all pretty basic, and I'd heard most of the before.
However, The Adventurous Writer only had six tips on them, and all of them were useful. I personally especially enjoyed the tip to use the "find" button in Microsoft Word to find phrases like "to be" and "there is" and other dull phrases, and otherwise reword them. I always think I catch phrases like that, but I'm sure there are still some that I just never notice, and therefore never revise. I never thought to specifically look for the words or phrases.
I also loved the tips "trust the writing process" and "let your writing go". I try so hard to do these things, but I still find myself re-reading stuff I've written and getting discouraged when the first draft I write isn't as good as I expect it to be. Trusting the writing process, and just letting the "stream of consciousness" writing flow out would really help me break out of a monotonous writing style. Letting your writing go is also important. My English professor once told me to "kill your babies", meaning delete a ton of your writing. Don't get attached. I, however, seem to think that everything I write is either inherently brilliant, or can be reworked to be brilliant. I need to do both of these things together; free-writing, and then deleting what sucks. If I do, it could greatly help my stories and my essays and everything else I write.
However, The Adventurous Writer only had six tips on them, and all of them were useful. I personally especially enjoyed the tip to use the "find" button in Microsoft Word to find phrases like "to be" and "there is" and other dull phrases, and otherwise reword them. I always think I catch phrases like that, but I'm sure there are still some that I just never notice, and therefore never revise. I never thought to specifically look for the words or phrases.
I also loved the tips "trust the writing process" and "let your writing go". I try so hard to do these things, but I still find myself re-reading stuff I've written and getting discouraged when the first draft I write isn't as good as I expect it to be. Trusting the writing process, and just letting the "stream of consciousness" writing flow out would really help me break out of a monotonous writing style. Letting your writing go is also important. My English professor once told me to "kill your babies", meaning delete a ton of your writing. Don't get attached. I, however, seem to think that everything I write is either inherently brilliant, or can be reworked to be brilliant. I need to do both of these things together; free-writing, and then deleting what sucks. If I do, it could greatly help my stories and my essays and everything else I write.
Friday, May 10, 2013
Blog #5
Upon review of the best blogs of 2012, I've chosen to look at the blog Evil Editor (http://evileditor.blogspot.com/?m=1) to review. I personally adore this blog. I was reading it for at least 20 minutes because it was just really amusing
The blog basically puts up letters to an editor/publisher, and talks about what was good and bad in the writing.
I liked it because it was amusing. They also talk about tips to good writing. The only problem was, as a first time user of the site, I didn't really understand what was going on.
Because of that, it was not totally easy to follow for someone who wasn't already familiar with his blogging and writing style.
From this blog, I learned quite a few things. First of all, the writers style was very bland. In my opinion, he just seemed sardonic and sarcastic.
There was no really strong "voice" the author had; he just sounded like every other funny but sarcastic author. Which is funny, because he's making fun of those authors in his blog. Ironic.
I also noticed how stupid the other authors (the ones who had written to him) sounded when they used improper grammar.
The lack of improper grammar made it almost impossible for me to focus on what was being said.
It's something I personally totally take for granted. But this made me realize how important it was.
Overall, the blog was incredibly interesting and a great read for anyone who wants to be a writer.
There were a few problems with it, but regardless it was an amusing, sarcastic, and enlightening read.
The blog basically puts up letters to an editor/publisher, and talks about what was good and bad in the writing.
I liked it because it was amusing. They also talk about tips to good writing. The only problem was, as a first time user of the site, I didn't really understand what was going on.
Because of that, it was not totally easy to follow for someone who wasn't already familiar with his blogging and writing style.
From this blog, I learned quite a few things. First of all, the writers style was very bland. In my opinion, he just seemed sardonic and sarcastic.
There was no really strong "voice" the author had; he just sounded like every other funny but sarcastic author. Which is funny, because he's making fun of those authors in his blog. Ironic.
I also noticed how stupid the other authors (the ones who had written to him) sounded when they used improper grammar.
The lack of improper grammar made it almost impossible for me to focus on what was being said.
It's something I personally totally take for granted. But this made me realize how important it was.
Overall, the blog was incredibly interesting and a great read for anyone who wants to be a writer.
There were a few problems with it, but regardless it was an amusing, sarcastic, and enlightening read.
Thursday, May 2, 2013
Blog Entry #4 - Finding Your Voice
Wow, all the exercises on finding your voice on the blog Men with Pens looked incredibly fun and interesting. However, I've never tried to be a bunch of different people at once. So I chose to write as best I could in a few different styles, and see how that turns out.
Here is the prompt:
Try on vastly different roles or personas, and write 200 words in each one. Be a Hell’s Angels biker. A lawyer. A stripper. A little kid. A pirate. A scientist. A parent. Switch around and try on as many roles, occupations or personas as you can – and then pretend you’re you. Write the last 200 words in that voice. See the difference?
I've decided to try to tell basically what I did today in a few different "voices", to get a feel for the exercise. Here goes nothing!
A Little Kid
Today, I went to school and do you know what? I saw a bunch of cool stuff and I talked to my friends but then I got in trouble and now I'm sad. The teacher said not to talk but I did it anyways because it was reaaaallllyyyy important and I just had to tell Brandon but he wasn't really listening anyways and he shushed me and then my teacher shushed me too.Then we had circle time and all talked about our homework and I did my homework last night so that was good. Then I went home and I had a playdate with my other friend Samantha and we got yummy food from a store that my mom goes to lots but I don't know what it's called. Cuz I forgot. Then I had to play with kids younger than me and they fell asleep really early and we had to watch a really boring show. It was stupid but I had to be the big girl when I was with them so. Did you know I'm up past bedtime?
A Teen Boy
I got to school and got yelled at for not paying attention. It was really pretty lame. I dunno, I had to tell my friend something and the teacher like, glared at me. Whatever. We had to talk about this totally stupid assignment too. Samantha came over. We got Taco Bell. I forgot my wallet so now I owe her money. I had to babysit tonight and it just really sucked. The kids were total brats and they would not listen to me. Shit. I gotta go to bed man. Nite.
Valley Girl
So like, today I went to school and I was a tiny bit late right? And my teacher just really was yelling at me! It was like she was picking on me because I was talking to Brandon while she was talking. Which is completely unfair! He is so totally cute by the way. Dibs. Anyways, so like, after that, we had to do this weird discussion of our homework. It was like interesting and stuff, and I feel like sooooooo many people in my class are totally smart! Afterwards I saw Samantha and it was really cool. We got some Taco Bell but I actually didn't eat anything because do you legitimately know how many freaking calories are in that? Samantha is so lucky she can eat that crap and still stay like totally skinny. I hate her. JK I love her! Then I had to babysit for these kids. They were so totally cute but like for some reason they weren't listening to me. It was absurd. Totally absurd. So I just told them that if they didn't like, start listening to me and stuff, I would send them bed and tell their mom. It worked sooooo well. I babysit for them like, all the time. They're just soooo cute! Anyways, I gotta sleep or I'm gonna be totally grouchy and like, ugly in the morning.
Famous Movie Star
I was definitely in class today, and I was talking about something very important when the instructor told me to stop talking. She told me to stop talking. Does she even know who I am? I met with Samantha directly afterwards, and she encouraged me to get some food. I told her I would have to work out with my personal trainer for days if I ate what she ate. But I ate it anyways. I don't have another movie shoot for a while, I can afford to get some fast food once in a while. Like I said, I'll just have to work out tomorrow. I babysat for some kids too. I got them to behave by offering to sign some posters for them. It worked pretty well. I have an early interview with Vogue tomorrow, so I have to catch up on some sleep now.
Myself
I went to my mass media class today. My boyfriend isn't usually in that class, but today he showed up outside the door to bring me a coffee (because he's awesome) and I got up to get it. Well, my teacher didn't exactly like that, and she told me not to do it again. Oops. Still, I got my coffee, and I didn't get in too much trouble. And it was so sweet of Brandon, I couldn't bear to tell him I got in trouble for his surprise delivery. Afterwards, I got to spend some time with Samantha. We didn't have much time, so we just grabbed some lunch at Taco Bell and caught up on life. I had to babysit all evening for some family friends, which was pretty cool because the kids were actually behaving decently well. They got into a few little spats, but it was nothing I couldn't handle. Unfortunately, I didn't get home until really late, and now I'm exhausted and dreading having to get up at 7 tomorrow morning. Alas, what can be done? So I really ought to sleep now, but before I do, there is a moth buzzing around my head, and it must die. It has disappeared, but I shall find it, and when I do, I shall kill it. Then and only then will I be able to sleep soundly.
Here is the prompt:
Try on vastly different roles or personas, and write 200 words in each one. Be a Hell’s Angels biker. A lawyer. A stripper. A little kid. A pirate. A scientist. A parent. Switch around and try on as many roles, occupations or personas as you can – and then pretend you’re you. Write the last 200 words in that voice. See the difference?
I've decided to try to tell basically what I did today in a few different "voices", to get a feel for the exercise. Here goes nothing!
A Little Kid
Today, I went to school and do you know what? I saw a bunch of cool stuff and I talked to my friends but then I got in trouble and now I'm sad. The teacher said not to talk but I did it anyways because it was reaaaallllyyyy important and I just had to tell Brandon but he wasn't really listening anyways and he shushed me and then my teacher shushed me too.Then we had circle time and all talked about our homework and I did my homework last night so that was good. Then I went home and I had a playdate with my other friend Samantha and we got yummy food from a store that my mom goes to lots but I don't know what it's called. Cuz I forgot. Then I had to play with kids younger than me and they fell asleep really early and we had to watch a really boring show. It was stupid but I had to be the big girl when I was with them so. Did you know I'm up past bedtime?
A Teen Boy
I got to school and got yelled at for not paying attention. It was really pretty lame. I dunno, I had to tell my friend something and the teacher like, glared at me. Whatever. We had to talk about this totally stupid assignment too. Samantha came over. We got Taco Bell. I forgot my wallet so now I owe her money. I had to babysit tonight and it just really sucked. The kids were total brats and they would not listen to me. Shit. I gotta go to bed man. Nite.
Valley Girl
So like, today I went to school and I was a tiny bit late right? And my teacher just really was yelling at me! It was like she was picking on me because I was talking to Brandon while she was talking. Which is completely unfair! He is so totally cute by the way. Dibs. Anyways, so like, after that, we had to do this weird discussion of our homework. It was like interesting and stuff, and I feel like sooooooo many people in my class are totally smart! Afterwards I saw Samantha and it was really cool. We got some Taco Bell but I actually didn't eat anything because do you legitimately know how many freaking calories are in that? Samantha is so lucky she can eat that crap and still stay like totally skinny. I hate her. JK I love her! Then I had to babysit for these kids. They were so totally cute but like for some reason they weren't listening to me. It was absurd. Totally absurd. So I just told them that if they didn't like, start listening to me and stuff, I would send them bed and tell their mom. It worked sooooo well. I babysit for them like, all the time. They're just soooo cute! Anyways, I gotta sleep or I'm gonna be totally grouchy and like, ugly in the morning.
Famous Movie Star
I was definitely in class today, and I was talking about something very important when the instructor told me to stop talking. She told me to stop talking. Does she even know who I am? I met with Samantha directly afterwards, and she encouraged me to get some food. I told her I would have to work out with my personal trainer for days if I ate what she ate. But I ate it anyways. I don't have another movie shoot for a while, I can afford to get some fast food once in a while. Like I said, I'll just have to work out tomorrow. I babysat for some kids too. I got them to behave by offering to sign some posters for them. It worked pretty well. I have an early interview with Vogue tomorrow, so I have to catch up on some sleep now.
Myself
I went to my mass media class today. My boyfriend isn't usually in that class, but today he showed up outside the door to bring me a coffee (because he's awesome) and I got up to get it. Well, my teacher didn't exactly like that, and she told me not to do it again. Oops. Still, I got my coffee, and I didn't get in too much trouble. And it was so sweet of Brandon, I couldn't bear to tell him I got in trouble for his surprise delivery. Afterwards, I got to spend some time with Samantha. We didn't have much time, so we just grabbed some lunch at Taco Bell and caught up on life. I had to babysit all evening for some family friends, which was pretty cool because the kids were actually behaving decently well. They got into a few little spats, but it was nothing I couldn't handle. Unfortunately, I didn't get home until really late, and now I'm exhausted and dreading having to get up at 7 tomorrow morning. Alas, what can be done? So I really ought to sleep now, but before I do, there is a moth buzzing around my head, and it must die. It has disappeared, but I shall find it, and when I do, I shall kill it. Then and only then will I be able to sleep soundly.
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